Well, you keep leaving out important details, but I'll offer the following:
   1) There is no -12 VDC.  It's just the ground for the 12 VDC power supply.  Otherwise, you have a major problem!
   2) I don't see a 24 VDC power supply, so I'm assuming that it connects to terminals TB1-3 and TB1-4 as indicated in Figure 2-13.
   3) There is no GND connection on TB1, so this is probably wrong.
   4) The loop resistor should be connected between TB1-2 and ground.
   5) The loop power supply should be connected to TB1-1.
   6) The DS2438 Vad should be connected to TB1-2.
   7) The DS2438 Vsens+ and Vsens- should be connected to ground.
   8) Your loop current to voltage conversions are backwards.
   9) You need a 4.7K ohm pull up on DQ.